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IceDrake Quote \| Reply \|	fragment of a story posted on: 8/13/2005 2:49:49 PM Sometimes I like to try writing stories, but I very rarely complete them. Maybe it's because I get too lazy, or I just kind of give up. Anyway, the other day I got this idea in my head and I decided to write it down. It's only really part of a story, but tell me what you think of it. I probably won't do anything with it, unless someone has some good suggestions for how I should continue the story. Tren jumped for joy when he saw the large creature ahead of him. "See there son?" Said his father. "Soon you will ride him to learn to become an Eemok Warrior." That was his dream. He dashed ahead to greet the animal. It was dog-like, the color of snow, and the fastest creature on Oiamar. Tren ran his fingers through the silky fur. The Eemok turned its head, and the sun reflected off its eyes giving it a very noble, calm, expression. "Its name is Eonar." Whispered Tren. Like most humans Tren could speak the fur-language that bonds men with animals. Soon he would train to be a warrior, and what better way to spend it, than on the back of an Eemok!
Rune* Quote \| Reply \|	fragment of a story replied on: 8/19/2005 7:17:21 AM Got some interesting ideas here, not read anything like this creature before What do you think the background story will be? Or are you looking for ideas?
IceDrake Quote \| Reply \|	fragment of a story replied on: 8/19/2005 2:07:23 PM I'm thinking it will be about a kid who trains in an army to fight a war, not sure who the war will be with. Maybe an alien race. That might make things interesting. I don't know much else other than that. Got any ideas?
Rune* Quote \| Reply \|	fragment of a story replied on: 8/19/2005 3:58:52 PM quote: I'm thinking it will be about a kid who trains in an army to fight a war, not sure who the war will be with. Maybe an alien race. That might make things interesting. I don't know much else other than that. Got any ideas? What about if your young character finds out the Eemok are actually intelligent. He has to fight a war to free them from slavery, by being used to serve man. They could have an history were they were brought here by another race something like that, so the local's didnt realise they werent just animals.
IceDrake Quote \| Reply \|	fragment of a story replied on: 8/20/2005 1:57:01 PM quote: quote: I'm thinking it will be about a kid who trains in an army to fight a war, not sure who the war will be with. Maybe an alien race. That might make things interesting. I don't know much else other than that. Got any ideas? What about if your young character finds out the Eemok are actually intelligent. He has to fight a war to free them from slavery, by being used to serve man. They could have an history were they were brought here by another race something like that, so the local's didnt realise they werent just animals. Hmmm. Maybe.
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