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*~The Morning Star~*
A Destroying Angel

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This message was updated on 6/1/2003 11:22:53 PM by *~The Morning Star~*

My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/1/2003 2:31:21 AM

"Pain on the Weak"

scarred and beaten
by that one love
i could never mend
abused and cheated
sitting by the scared
hurtful life you led
betrayal and lying
from the only bond
that could leave me dying

you beat my lights out
salt in my open wounds
heaping pain on the weak

you beat my lights out
salt in my open wounds
heaping pain on the weak

my help i cannot give
to you who turned
now why to live
my blood i bled
for any words
of the anguish in my head

you beat my lights out
salt in my open wounds
heaping pain on the weak

you beat my lights out
salt in my open wounds
heaping pain on the weak

who can i trust
now that my trust
is gone with you?

(sorry this is really rough, just had to get some stuff off my chest.)
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/14/2003 9:27:43 PM

dude those songs are sick. . . . are they rock rap pop or how do you sing em? I was singing them and I sang em "Pop" and it sounded awsome. . . . .
*~The Morning Star~*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/15/2003 8:23:26 PM

i actually do em as a screaming sound. in the same genre as thursday or finch or i do them like a sepultura song, ive also considered some days of the new type acoustic rock to work on them.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/15/2003 8:59:38 PM

ooo those are really good. . . .where do you get the thoughts like what makes you right these songs?
*~The Morning Star~*
A Destroying Angel

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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:01:01 AM

it comes from being very stoic with my emotions, i dont show displeasure, i only vent hate about things that have no importance, this is how i cope with life, i write and get it out there...as a matter of fact, ive turned my dad on to writing instead of holding it in and blowing up about the slightest thing. it works for me, maybe not everyone.
fluttergrrl
*CORNELLIAN*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:06:12 AM

writing is a form of catharsis.
*~The Morning Star~*
A Destroying Angel

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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:15:50 AM

it really is. it is my way of expressing the repressed feelings, it doesn't hurt anyone, and it makes me feel better.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:19:54 AM

really? mine just makes me realise how pathetic my life is. which is an okay thing i guess. gotta face reality sooner or later.
*~The Morning Star~*
A Destroying Angel

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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:24:22 AM

trust me, you are alive, you are breathing, there are people who care about you. life is far from pathetic. try to use all of your emotions when you write, it leaves you drained, but i've also found that if i just rip up what i create, it releases those feelings, which is why i usually write my songs on my computer so i have at least a copy of them.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:32:57 AM

wow.

i sat there and stared at that for ages and couldn't think of anything to say other than "wow". LOL.

some days are worse than others, you know? today i'm in a 'life is pathetic' mood, tomorrow i'll probably be okay. just one of those things. swings and roundabouts.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 4:57:18 AM

small arcs are good.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 5:01:58 AM

what about rollercoasters that go down more than they go up?

which doesn't sound right but you know what i mean...
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 5:11:34 AM

i hope you are talking about depression there Sarah..

how the hell does a roller coaster manage to do that anyway? i don't think that is physically possible, unless the rollercoaster ends in a different spot that it starts.
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 6/17/2003 5:15:05 AM

so i suck at euphemisms.

*~The Morning Star~*
A Destroying Angel

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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/3/2003 3:59:19 AM

this is a poem i wrote almost a year ago.

"There is no place to turn," she said
"from the cavernous wasteland in my head."
"I'm lost, Bricked up, behind a wall.
Drifing further and further into downfall."
"Where once was light, now only dark.
I shot my only arrow, missing the mark."
she said, "No one should ever wait.
I don't want to be saved from my fate."
"My short hard-fought journey is through.
it would have been sooner, if not for you."
"Only one final request,
Dear mother try your best."
"No tear should be shed,
when finally I lie cold upon my bed."
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