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Artists Log in here. If you have any poems or lyrics or anything considered art by all means post it. Due to the nature of art this forum has the rules bent in order to allow people the freedom that is art. But i ask you to be reasonable and no Discriminatory conduct. You will be Kickfucked for it, trust me.
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Kaiser_Sosae
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/3/2003 4:04:26 AM Fuck man, that was good. |
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~DeadGirl~
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/3/2003 4:40:47 AM #1 your poetry is not junk #2 that brought up my last 6 months, in a different perspective than what you had written, but you know what I mean #3 Edit evey post in here so the subject no longer says junk. How about My Songs And Poetry? |
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Nuisance
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/3/2003 5:49:14 AM it was too long between posts by you Ex but it was well worth the wait. |
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obg45
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/3/2003 4:59:24 PM Nuisance is right Exploder, don't make it so long between posts. You writings are beautiful. I can tell they come from the heart. 
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GageAgainstTheMachine
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/11/2003 11:59:48 PM Your material is great. Speaking from experience, do you ever have trouble writing without rhyming? I know I do, and its sometimes nearly impossible to avoid. Keep up the uber cool poetry. |
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*~The Morning Star~*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/12/2003 12:46:33 AM actually, the majority of my songs don't rhyme, but i like it better if my stuff does, however my english professor, who studied poetry for 15 years is trying to get me to stop. |
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troutbot
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/14/2003 10:22:32 AM Is he trying to get you to stop rhyming, sorry if I've misunderstood that one? I usually like the stuff that doesn't rhyme personally, but if it sounds good then go with it. I think I much prefer it when words sound similar or have similar stresses of syllables to them. Whatever's natural, man. Keep up the writing, they sound good, really emotive. |
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*~The Morning Star~*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/18/2003 4:57:51 AM "One More Time Again" I'm breathing now, But I cant see how. I'm dying inside and i just want to hide. I want it to go away, if only for a day. I'd make it right, try to see with new sight. and bleed myself again. I come to you here, my head full of fear only to have you near one more time again. I'm living now but I cant see how though its said and done i just want to run forever in my pain and drenched in the rain nights spent in a deep sigh dreaming of days gone by only to bleed myself again. i come to you here my head full of fear only to have you near one more time again everything i said was real was the pain i feel nothing i said was true if it means something to you i'd bleed myself again only for one more time again one more time again there's never time again. |
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*~The Morning Star~*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/18/2003 5:25:21 AM here are some really really old ones... Broken Man-(a song) I look inside of me, I have a seering vision The pain, no one can see. Keeps me locked away. A shattered reality, self-loathing in me breeds. Isolation won't let me be my soul deprived of its needs. I've gone too far to get home There's too far left to go. A spirit to forever roam. A Broken Man can't say no. A Broken Man can't say no. In the End, I'm Broken In the End, I'm Broken In the End, I'm Just Broken. (Broken, Unbroken, Broken, Unbroken) You Broke Me. ----------------------------------------- Godliness-(a song) You look at me, Like I'm the only one. You spit on me, Because I tell the truth. You hate me, When I show all your lies. You take me, To stab me in the back. Because, You're so conceited convinced of your own godliness I tell you, Only truth and lies I show you, All the light and dark I gave you, Every drop of blood And you, Drank it up and wanted more. Because, you're so conceited convinced of your own godliness Your not better, In your mind. Your only bitter About shit you can't define You want to be right but wrong is all you know You hate, because its what you are. Because, you're so conceited convinced of your own godliness You'll never be, Half of what you claim You'll die, In sin like all the rest. Because, you're so conceited convinced of you're own godliness. --------------------------- Never Here-(one of the first songs I wrote-a ballad) I see your eyes, I see your smile I see your face, I feel your heart I hear your laugh, your angel voice I feel inside, a pain too deep A single word, takes me down Lost without you, cannot find you, I have lost you but you were never here Nights alone, thinking what I did to make it go away you were my only thing now your gone, and I'm left with nothing Lost without you, cannot find you I have lost you, but you were never here I don't want to feel this way i only want, what i want you to have Lost without you, cannot find you I have lost you But you were never here. (scream) NEVER x4 |
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obg45
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/19/2003 6:46:15 PM Sean, your writing is really good. You write in a way that expresses emotions, that make me feel what's going on. Have you ever had anyone look at your work? I think you should consider it. Keep writing and sharing with us. Thanks
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fluttergrrl
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/21/2003 3:22:26 AM brilliant. thanks for sharing sean. maybe one day i'll be brave enough to put some of my stuff up here. |
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Nuisance
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 7/29/2003 7:04:47 AM Great stuff Sean. Come on Sarah, start posting
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*~The Morning Star~*
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My Songs & Junk
replied on: 8/31/2003 4:06:30 AM here's a new one: Time simple game for a simple mind reason now i will not find confusion, child be my life defiled promise to wear the ring succumb to this lying king what stops for no man brings about our wrong justifies moving on killing us all waiting for our fall old man a life gone by remember how now you're nigh saving grace from an endless race free to be another way dying now just a last day what stops for no man brings about our wrong justifies moving on killing us all, and waiting for our fall |
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