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Forta-Kon
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This message was updated on 5/17/2003 6:57:37 AM by Forta-Kon



Dog of a Day
posted on: 5/17/2003 6:50:10 AM

Hey... I got this up at my forum... But I wanted to know what ya thought of it. Its in kinda olden time style...

..::DOG of a Day::..

Dog this day!

What a retched day to be damned!

A day with no gratitude for your breath!

Am I not as worthy as a morning bird?

Why shun your light from me?

Let me cry out with a tune as heard!

Dog this day indeed!

And to all that follow!

Damned you who bid me good fortune!

'tis not you that wake with the morn' laughing in your face!

Not another shall I meet!

I'll give neither chase nor game on the morrow's morn!

Scorn me not again you dog of a day!

For when that dusk breaks again,

You'll find only this soul empty resting-place!
Randomly_insane
*DOORKNOB*

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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/17/2003 7:08:38 AM


dude i like the words , but i can't seem to think how it's meant to sound

hmmmmmm
Forta-Kon
That Forta Guy
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/17/2003 5:08:52 PM

LOL... sorry man. Its not really a song. I guess you could slam some Heavy-Metal out and scream it.

Its more meant to be read like from an old angry tired man...
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/18/2003 12:40:07 AM

very nice, forta, so, you are a poetry writer? i likes, keep up the good work i would like to read more
Kaiser_Sosae
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/18/2003 12:47:06 AM

A POETRY WRITER?

A POET

LMAO

"I'm just haggin on ya" (in nerdish voice)
~DeadGirl~
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/18/2003 1:25:02 AM

I like it, sounds like something I'd write
Randomly_insane
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/18/2003 2:26:06 AM


oops sorry mate , i was thinking of it like a song...but now i've got hte idea , tahts cool
obg45
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/18/2003 9:21:14 PM

Nice work Forta. Thanks for sharing
Randomly_insane
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/21/2003 7:54:26 AM

Forta-Kon
That Forta Guy
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/22/2003 7:39:20 PM

Dork Nob?
Kaiser_Sosae
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 5/22/2003 9:01:22 PM

You see, poor old Random is not important, she is a failure and is nothing more than scum on the earth

But we still love her

I know that explained nothing.
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Dog of a Day
replied on: 6/7/2003 11:00:26 AM


no mike my love , that explained everything

i am the doorknob of the world...... no one ever thinks of how inportant i am , no one stops to apprecaite me , i'm just scum , a lowly doorknob , but every one loves me coz if i wasn't here you'd all be stuck in your rooms
i'm one of the many under appreciated neccesities of your lives
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