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Loaded Weapon
replied on: 11/1/2003 2:58:33 PM

nice peep son
i just feel that when people talk about guns and shit then the entire verse turns to another level, a kinda played out level in hiphop right now but at the same time a level of which i believe is real hiphop
another thing when you take a verse to this level dont mix it with a softer rap
at times when reading your verse i felt as if you were flowing with a bit of swagger and then it changes to being defensive then back to having a swagger
choose one or the other and you will find that your verses will elevate to that next level
keep posting here man and you will be a true netcee in no time

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